Do you think these sentences are grammatically correct? - industrial rehabilitation
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This program consists of planting high of about 36 million hectares of land in Indonesia by the industrial plantations, forest and land rehabilitation, to prevent the fight against illegal logging / Fight against forest fires and promoting the sustainable use of natural resources.
Wednesday, December 30, 2009
Industrial Rehabilitation Do You Think These Sentences Are Grammatically Correct?
1 comment:
Well first it is only a word, and to this end is too long and full of too many words of one syllable for readability. You should try to break a little maybe two or three sentences.
The entire program is designed to return the forest of more than 36 million hectares of land in Indonesia. The project will (consisting of industrial forest plantations? Definitely!) Combating illegal logging and forest fire prevention and the promotion of awareness about the sustainable use of natural resources.
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